01-26-2013, 12:16 PM
Todd - thanks a lot for the input, I'll keep the ambiguity thing in mind and try to give more concrete images in the future 
rowens - thanks for the reply, the whereabouts of the speaker should be vague, I feel like it's up to the reader to determine, then again maybe I'm wrong on a side note I'm working on another poem right now and hope to post it as soon as it's finished
rowens - thanks for the reply, the whereabouts of the speaker should be vague, I feel like it's up to the reader to determine, then again maybe I'm wrong
on a side note I'm working on another poem right now and hope to post it as soon as it's finished