01-26-2013, 06:38 AM
Thank you for your critique. Do you have any suggestions which synonym would fit better than "utmost"?
I'm sorry, but English is not my first language...what exactly do you mean with "Your interpretation of the word and "creation"....The rhymes are very thin." Are you only talking about the rhymes from my first stanza or about all of them?
You are saying there is a lot missing...what exactly do you think is missing?
I really appreciate your help!
I'm sorry, but English is not my first language...what exactly do you mean with "Your interpretation of the word and "creation"....The rhymes are very thin." Are you only talking about the rhymes from my first stanza or about all of them?
You are saying there is a lot missing...what exactly do you think is missing?
I really appreciate your help!