01-23-2013, 04:04 PM
Hi,
great effort.
I really like the third stanza for the strengthening theme it gives to the overall poem - also loved the line Leanne mentioned and a close 2nd was Endless fairy tales take up space.
Perhaps on my third pass, leanne is right in what she says about running out of steam, but first and second time through i had not noticed. I was just enjoying the read.
Thanks for shareing. AJ.
great effort.
I really like the third stanza for the strengthening theme it gives to the overall poem - also loved the line Leanne mentioned and a close 2nd was Endless fairy tales take up space.
Perhaps on my third pass, leanne is right in what she says about running out of steam, but first and second time through i had not noticed. I was just enjoying the read.
Thanks for shareing. AJ.