Blues
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(01-23-2013, 06:23 AM)Pete Ak Wrote:  Like psalms that tell of hardship and pain,
^-- When I think of hardship in the Bible, I think of Job.
forbearance and strength from bearing chains,
Blues makes one weep for this unholy world
way before the twelfth bar.

Felt the blues to my roots
when I had no boots
and wandered down Nowhere Street;
but they melted away
on the revival day,
^-- Confused me a bit. I think of a revival as an event. So maybe something like:

but they melted and went
out the revival tent


I met a feller
who had no feet.
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Messages In This Thread
Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-10-2013, 11:00 PM
RE: Blues - by Arriedo - 01-10-2013, 11:31 PM
RE: Blues - by rowens - 01-11-2013, 12:12 AM
RE: Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-11-2013, 09:18 PM
RE: Blues - by PoetryAndPhysics - 01-12-2013, 03:58 AM
RE: Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-23-2013, 01:52 AM
RE: Blues - by tectak - 01-23-2013, 05:37 AM
RE: Blues - by Pete Ak - 01-23-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Blues - by svanhoeven - 01-23-2013, 07:23 AM
RE: Blues - by tectak - 01-23-2013, 08:48 AM



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