01-23-2013, 07:22 AM
I actually do think we're riding this to death.
I have one nit only:
"Unconscious errors": I guess you know why. Because: are there conscious errors ? See, what I mean and that makes me think , that "unconscious" is owed to the metrics rather than to the content: a filler.
I think it is a quite good poem and maybe give it a rest for some days. I think Todd wrote that above.
cheers
Serge
I have one nit only:
"Unconscious errors": I guess you know why. Because: are there conscious errors ? See, what I mean and that makes me think , that "unconscious" is owed to the metrics rather than to the content: a filler.
I think it is a quite good poem and maybe give it a rest for some days. I think Todd wrote that above.
cheers
Serge