Valentine
#4
Hey guys. After a long discussion in mild, it has been updated to:

Like a drop in its delicate descent
towards the rigid ground;
a mountain top, which never bends
thick and rarely downed.

A rose, so grand and pliant,
deflective in the wind,
yet the roots defiant
the flower's core rescind.

Prowess to speak, declare,
around her breaks and cracks.
Set ablaze, a potent flare,
daring, by much lacks.

Knees shake and shoulders shiver.
All thoughts depart.
Like a leaf into a river
by the fast-paced beat of my heart.

In her presence, a mind obtuse
and courage chooses to abscond.
Reason proclaims that it's no use
but heart, near stars and far beyond.

For her, sentiment I now assert
with line and word,
as my mouth may distort
but my writing remains unblurred.

For her, that stirs up my emotions
and makes my heart race like a drop;
she, who controls my notions
and is in my thoughts non-stop.

A question, now, about to follow
for you, a girl divine.
Your hand, may I borrow
on this year's Valentine?


Messages In This Thread
Valentine - by Pigler - 01-18-2013, 07:01 AM
RE: Valentine - by tectak - 01-18-2013, 07:29 AM
RE: Valentine - by billy - 01-22-2013, 10:53 AM
RE: Valentine - by Pigler - 01-22-2013, 02:55 PM
RE: Valentine - by rowens - 01-23-2013, 11:44 PM
RE: Valentine - by Leanne - 02-05-2013, 06:05 AM



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