01-22-2013, 05:58 AM
I like it, but it seems as if you should combine a lot of lines.
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First poem ever! - by burka - 01-22-2013, 03:20 AM
RE: First poem ever! - by corawrites - 01-22-2013, 04:08 AM
RE: First poem ever! - by burka - 01-22-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: First poem ever! - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-22-2013, 05:01 AM
RE: First poem ever! - by burka - 01-23-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: First poem ever! - by Jagger Cyde - 01-22-2013, 05:58 AM
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