01-21-2013, 04:24 PM
Okay then, I understand that. You do have that Nothing Like The Sun thing going on, not saying that she's perfect. That's good.
If I may say so, it seems a bit awkward to use near-rhyme for I my two out of three stanzas. Is there a better way to phrase it?
If I may say so, it seems a bit awkward to use near-rhyme for I my two out of three stanzas. Is there a better way to phrase it?
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind