01-21-2013, 03:48 PM
Yes its a love poem. Extended metaphor of what she is. Not really going for irony.
"Sallow seagull"? I'm really sorry... But... Do you know what sallow means? I'd recommend looking it up.
I was leaning toward the pale part of the definition, I guess I was forcing it.
I am in the novice section for a reason
. any other feedback is appreciated.
"Sallow seagull"? I'm really sorry... But... Do you know what sallow means? I'd recommend looking it up.
I was leaning toward the pale part of the definition, I guess I was forcing it.
I am in the novice section for a reason
. any other feedback is appreciated.