01-21-2013, 03:30 PM
Erm... I'm not exactly sure what your poem is about... It seems to be a love poem, but...
"Sallow seagull"? I'm really sorry... But... Do you know what sallow means? I'd recommend looking it up.
In case you're too busy to, it means sickly looking and pale-yellowish. So... Is this an ironic poem, or are you going for a My Mistress's Eyes Are Nothing Like the Sun vibe here?
I'm really sorry I can't say anything else, but I kinda need to know the subject better than I do now.
"Sallow seagull"? I'm really sorry... But... Do you know what sallow means? I'd recommend looking it up.
In case you're too busy to, it means sickly looking and pale-yellowish. So... Is this an ironic poem, or are you going for a My Mistress's Eyes Are Nothing Like the Sun vibe here?
I'm really sorry I can't say anything else, but I kinda need to know the subject better than I do now.
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind