guilt
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another awesome poem. feel like you completely express the mediocrity of most people and life as well.

Wallpaper the word "meaning"
Empty as these rooms
With all their books and papers and computers and televisions
Nothing is anything here
But how it appears that we have everything
I am a fool rolling around on a filthy bed of gold

this part is so true. we appear to have everything but in reality we are empty and have nothing this is so in line with my thoughts and what i base my material off of. nice work nice piece
"Life is a dream for the wise, a game for the fool, a comedy for the rich, a tragedy for the poor."-Sholom Aleichem
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guilt - by corawrites - 01-21-2013, 02:58 PM
RE: guilt - by doolasmind#11 - 01-21-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: guilt - by Air - 01-21-2013, 03:27 PM
RE: guilt - by billy - 01-21-2013, 03:42 PM
RE: guilt - by cidermaid - 01-21-2013, 04:35 PM
RE: guilt - by Jagger Cyde - 01-22-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: guilt - by Pryderi - 01-27-2013, 09:32 AM



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