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01-21-2013, 01:50 PM
(01-21-2013, 01:37 PM)brandontoh Wrote:Thanks, I think I see what you mean, perhaps i will go into more detail(01-21-2013, 01:34 PM)grippster Wrote: oh sorry i meant to say i dont know what i want critiqued. i do want critiques though hahaWell, I've said my piece already. Personally I think for poems to elicit strong emotions, they need to leave enough room for imagination. So just take what you think works, it's your poem after all. |
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Individual Breakdown - by grippster - 01-21-2013, 12:17 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 12:40 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 12:43 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by brandontoh - 01-21-2013, 12:45 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 12:46 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 12:49 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 12:55 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 01:00 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by grippster - 01-21-2013, 01:28 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 01:34 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by tectak - 01-22-2013, 12:27 AM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by brandontoh - 01-21-2013, 01:31 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by grippster - 01-21-2013, 01:34 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by brandontoh - 01-21-2013, 01:37 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by grippster - 01-21-2013, 01:50 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:51 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by Card - 01-21-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by billy - 01-21-2013, 03:23 PM
RE: Individual Breakdown - by svanhoeven - 01-22-2013, 02:30 AM
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