01-21-2013, 01:37 PM
(01-21-2013, 01:34 PM)grippster Wrote: oh sorry i meant to say i dont know what i want critiqued. i do want critiques though hahaWell, I've said my piece already. Personally I think for poems to elicit strong emotions, they need to leave enough room for imagination. So just take what you think works, it's your poem after all.
Back!

