A Sullen Silent Night

A Sullen Silent Night

rowens
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01-21-2013, 01:35 PM

I think it could use a little work. But I need to read it a few more times, so I can give you some better opinions. I like

A stoned rejoice; the flowers bloom
Like a summer joy that found its tomb
In the sullen silence of a lonely night

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A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-21-2013, 01:10 PM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:25 PM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-21-2013, 01:32 PM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:35 PM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by tectak - 01-22-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-22-2013, 06:25 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-22-2013, 08:13 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by billy - 01-22-2013, 10:15 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by serge gurkski - 01-22-2013, 09:44 PM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-23-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by serge gurkski - 01-23-2013, 04:07 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Erthona - 01-17-2014, 05:53 PM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-18-2014, 06:06 AM

RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Brownlie - 01-21-2014, 11:34 AM

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