Individual Breakdown

[brandontoh]

I can't breathe.

Dwelling inside my broken mind.
Hold the pills in my hand.

I want to numb my thoughts.
See the world through a blank stare.

Leave the introspection
that has butchered me.

Drift in synthetic parallels
of interpersonal security.


theres an edit. thanks guys. I have never taken pills, but i often try to imagine. i like cigs. smoking makes my mind feel like one, and its things like smoking than can help me imagine what some pharmitueicals are like.

Im trying to add more but can't get the quality im looking for. i dont what anything particular critiqued, just tell me what you think

If you don't really want anything critiqued, why post in the serious critique section? It should be moved to either mild or miscellaneous then.