A Sullen Silent Night
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No mans mind is safe

man's

Nor can woman’s hearts escape

women's

The sullen silence of a lonely night

Storm clouds follow sunny sky’s


skies



Like blood flows after battle cries
But true pain grows from love that’s died
Through the sullen silence of a lonely night

A mothers voice inside a gloom

mother's

A lovers choice brought naught but doom

lover's


A stoned rejoice; the flowers bloom
Like a summer joy that found its tomb
In the sullen silence of a lonely night

This is starting to sound nice.

A shrivelled shell of yesteryear
A drunken ghost, an empty beer
Her haunting face that reappears
Over the sullen silence of a lonely night

Dreams fade and drift away
A brilliant red that slipped to grey
As I became a sullen silent night


Go over it a few more times. And say what if any problems you have with it.
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Messages In This Thread
A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-21-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:25 PM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-21-2013, 01:32 PM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:35 PM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by tectak - 01-22-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Jae Mc Donnell - 01-22-2013, 06:25 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-22-2013, 08:13 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by billy - 01-22-2013, 10:15 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by serge gurkski - 01-22-2013, 09:44 PM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-23-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by serge gurkski - 01-23-2013, 04:07 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Erthona - 01-17-2014, 05:53 PM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Wjames - 01-18-2014, 06:06 AM
RE: A Sullen Silent Night - by Brownlie - 01-21-2014, 11:34 AM



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