01-21-2013, 10:51 AM
Hey AJ,
This seems like a fun form to try and I like that you reversed it. I have to admit that I don't think the text is boring at all. You have some amazing images:
"A blanket of confetti."----my favorite
"Fragrance filled, alabaster jar,
broken, but not stumped – a new tree grows."
I like what you did here. A very smooth and nice connection.
This seems like a fun form to try and I like that you reversed it. I have to admit that I don't think the text is boring at all. You have some amazing images:
"A blanket of confetti."----my favorite
"Fragrance filled, alabaster jar,
broken, but not stumped – a new tree grows."
I like what you did here. A very smooth and nice connection.