01-21-2013, 10:30 AM
Fair. I still contend that you can write a poem shorter than you have here with more imagery. But I'm not trying to be argumentative so I'll let it sit.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Currently untitled (First poem) - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: Currently untitled (First poem) - by Todd - 01-21-2013, 09:33 AM
RE: Currently untitled (First poem) - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 10:13 AM
RE: Currently untitled (First poem) - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 09:36 AM
RE: Currently untitled (First poem) - by Todd - 01-21-2013, 10:19 AM
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RE: Currently untitled (First poem) - by Todd - 01-21-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: Currently untitled (First poem) - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 10:37 AM
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