01-21-2013, 10:27 AM
(01-21-2013, 10:19 AM)Todd Wrote: With all due respect you absolutely can create imagery for lust, greed, and a loss of morals.I should have better phrased and explained what I meant more. First off, I shouldn't have said "No way" because that is very untrue and not what I completely meant. Yes, I can create images for lust, greed, and a loss of morals. However a big intention of mine for this poem was to keep it short and fairly simple. I felt that in order to create an image for those things then that would break my intention. So what I should have said in my last post was that I could not find a way to create images for those things without increasing the size of my poem too much. Nor was it really my intention to have the whole stanza be imagery.
You can use images to show just about anything. Don't be too quick to dismiss it. It takes practice, but can be done.

