01-21-2013, 06:55 AM
For her, sentiment I now assert
with line and word
as my mouth may distort
but my writing remains unblurred
For her, that stirs up my emotions
and makes my heart race like a drop
her, who controls my notions
and is in my thoughts non-stop
A question, now, about to follow
for you, a girl divine
your hand, may I borrow
on this year's Valentine?
I do see, indeed
I will work on commas and punctuation after I get the wording and forms right. I want this to be as perfect as possible ;D
with line and word
as my mouth may distort
but my writing remains unblurred
For her, that stirs up my emotions
and makes my heart race like a drop
her, who controls my notions
and is in my thoughts non-stop
A question, now, about to follow
for you, a girl divine
your hand, may I borrow
on this year's Valentine?
I do see, indeed
I will work on commas and punctuation after I get the wording and forms right. I want this to be as perfect as possible ;D

