01-21-2013, 06:32 AM
Does 'she' or 'her' go in those two spots? 'For her', or 'for she'? With that, I usually don't pay attention to what's correct in such cases. Something you can look into.
I think 'stirs' has one 'r'.
Is there any set metre you're going for? Sometimes you do, sometimes you don't. If not, you could have:
...that stirs my emotions... without "up". Your decision.
I think 'stirs' has one 'r'.
Is there any set metre you're going for? Sometimes you do, sometimes you don't. If not, you could have:
...that stirs my emotions... without "up". Your decision.