01-21-2013, 05:56 AM
Okay. Since I was just enlightened I was talking about me not her most of the poem(oops), I decided to put another stanza in:
Sentiment I now assert
with line and word
as my mouth may distort
but my writing remains unblurred
For her, that stirrs up my emotions
and makes me feel like a water drop
her, who controls my notions
and is in my thoughts non-stop
A question, now, about to follow
for a girl divine
your hand, may I borrow
on this year's Valentine?
Sentiment I now assert
with line and word
as my mouth may distort
but my writing remains unblurred
For her, that stirrs up my emotions
and makes me feel like a water drop
her, who controls my notions
and is in my thoughts non-stop
A question, now, about to follow
for a girl divine
your hand, may I borrow
on this year's Valentine?