01-21-2013, 04:52 AM
So: Daring lacks, by much.
The syntax is screwed up to force the rhyme.
And, Daring in his lack would have meant: Daring in his lack....
Lack of... (fill in the space): better ways to say things, a better relationship with the girl.
Daring, by much, lacks?
Does that get the meaning you want?
The syntax is screwed up to force the rhyme.
And, Daring in his lack would have meant: Daring in his lack....
Lack of... (fill in the space): better ways to say things, a better relationship with the girl.
Daring, by much, lacks?
Does that get the meaning you want?