01-21-2013, 04:10 AM
Ah. I think I see what you mean.
I still disagree with you about "Lacks" being wrong. "He lacks," not "he lack." It's a tense thing, I think. But honestly I can't remember the exact reason, I just know I've never read that in any kind of book I've read.
You're looking at "lack" as only a noun, judging by your last post. It is used as a verb in this poem. Well, it was until you told him not to.
I still disagree with you about "Lacks" being wrong. "He lacks," not "he lack." It's a tense thing, I think. But honestly I can't remember the exact reason, I just know I've never read that in any kind of book I've read.
You're looking at "lack" as only a noun, judging by your last post. It is used as a verb in this poem. Well, it was until you told him not to.
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind