01-21-2013, 02:15 AM
I had to search for my definition for a few minutes, but I found this:
b: difficult to comprehend : not clear or precise in thought or expression
I was thinking like when someone calls a book "dense". They don't mean dull or slow-witted, but compact, with lots of things going on, like a dense ocean.
I'm being clear with you, as much as I can. That doesn't mean my mind, or my poems are as clear. Since you asked: you might can search this forum for something like "Building a Nest Much More Complicated" and see what I mean.
I'll read your revisions now or in a little bit.
Of course, I didn't revise my poem. I'm very stubborn. Maybe your obtuse mind can get something out of it.
It helps, too, if you put your revision in the first post, above the original version.
b: difficult to comprehend : not clear or precise in thought or expression
I was thinking like when someone calls a book "dense". They don't mean dull or slow-witted, but compact, with lots of things going on, like a dense ocean.
I'm being clear with you, as much as I can. That doesn't mean my mind, or my poems are as clear. Since you asked: you might can search this forum for something like "Building a Nest Much More Complicated" and see what I mean.
I'll read your revisions now or in a little bit.
Of course, I didn't revise my poem. I'm very stubborn. Maybe your obtuse mind can get something out of it.
It helps, too, if you put your revision in the first post, above the original version.