this is a Poem
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Crinkly hair, too messy, shaggy.
Clothes are grey and brownish boring.
Yeah, she sits there like a herring

You can say 'an herring'; some people don't.

staring, staring, staring, staring
into particles and air.

Seldom pips a word if any,
often makes the teacher angry.
Nothin special ´bout her really
´xept her hands are full of many

'xcept...

charcoal stains and bright paint spots.

Then the lunch brake starts too early
and the others vanish hasty,
but not quiet, boring "curly"
moving not at all with hurry.
She´s is somewhere else in mind


She's; or, she is


Careful with a gesture gentle
she expose her crayons, pencils.

The reverse of "gesture gentle" can be thought about. And 'she exposes her crayons'.

In her safe and holy temple
with some green and orange purple
she compose, compose.

Maybe 'composes'.

So far, it's not so bad.
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Messages In This Thread
this is a Poem - by Meep - 01-21-2013, 01:01 AM
RE: this is a Poem - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:17 AM
RE: this is a Poem - by benthejack - 01-21-2013, 08:06 AM
RE: this is a Poem - by brandontoh - 01-21-2013, 11:42 AM



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