01-21-2013, 01:01 AM
Working title: Pre artist
Crinkly hair, too messy, shaggy.
Clothes are grey and brownish boring.
Yeah, she sits there like a herring
staring, staring, staring, staring
into particles and air.
Seldom pips a word if any,
often makes the teacher angry.
Nothin special ´bout her really
´xept her hands are full of many
charcoal stains and bright paint spots.
Then the lunch brake starts too early
and the others vanish hasty,
but not quiet, boring "curly"
moving not at all with hurry.
She´s is somewhere else in mind
Careful with a gesture gentle
she expose her crayons, pencils.
In her safe and holy temple
with some green and orange purple
she compose, compose.
I have a hard time deciding where to put the , and .´s in this one. And i´m also wondering if this is story wise making enough sense to understand, like i´ve mentioned english is not my first language.
Crinkly hair, too messy, shaggy.
Clothes are grey and brownish boring.
Yeah, she sits there like a herring
staring, staring, staring, staring
into particles and air.
Seldom pips a word if any,
often makes the teacher angry.
Nothin special ´bout her really
´xept her hands are full of many
charcoal stains and bright paint spots.
Then the lunch brake starts too early
and the others vanish hasty,
but not quiet, boring "curly"
moving not at all with hurry.
She´s is somewhere else in mind
Careful with a gesture gentle
she expose her crayons, pencils.
In her safe and holy temple
with some green and orange purple
she compose, compose.
I have a hard time deciding where to put the , and .´s in this one. And i´m also wondering if this is story wise making enough sense to understand, like i´ve mentioned english is not my first language.