Dependence
#11
The first poem was better than the edit because it captured more raw emotion, but it is far too wordy.
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Dependence - by nothing_good16 - 12-06-2012, 08:18 AM
RE: Dependence - by billy - 12-07-2012, 10:51 AM
RE: Dependence - by nothing_good16 - 01-11-2013, 08:36 AM
RE: Dependence - by shemthepenman - 01-11-2013, 07:23 PM
RE: Dependence - by Pete Ak - 01-11-2013, 08:38 PM
RE: Dependence - by svanhoeven - 01-16-2013, 01:05 PM
RE: Dependence - by nothing_good16 - 01-17-2013, 02:33 AM
RE: Dependence - by svanhoeven - 01-17-2013, 03:26 AM
RE: Dependence - by Mr. Shankly - 01-20-2013, 10:03 PM



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