Refresh me with apples (an experiment)
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Apparently this form is called Nonet (1st line 9 syllables decreasing down to line 9 with just 1 syllable...then i reversed it just because).


Refresh me with apples.

Like an apple tree, my fine lover.
A billowing love banner blush
A blanket of confetti.
He supports and shades me.
I partake of his,
laid out banquet.
Refreshed,
I
faint.
Crushed fruit,
a felled tree.
Lumber harvest.
The logos logged fuel.
Distilled aromatics.
An outstanding apple tree.
Fragrance filled, alabaster jar,
broken, but not stumped – a new tree grows.


(I know...not much to recommend, the text is predictably boring. Just like experimenting with new forms)
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Refresh me with apples (an experiment) - by cidermaid - 01-20-2013, 06:35 PM
RE: Refresh me with apples (an experiment) - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 01:07 AM
RE: Refresh me with apples (an experiment) - by rowens - 01-21-2013, 06:12 AM



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