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Humanities Zoo
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01-20-2013, 03:03 PM
I really like this, and I think beginning and ending the poem with the same thing really worked well for you here. I do think that this could stand to be divided into more stanzas.
Additionally, it seemed to me that lines 1-4 were contradicted by lines 5-6? This may very well be me misinterpreting, I DON'T KNOW. |
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Humanities Zoo - by doolasmind#11 - 01-20-2013, 02:15 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by corawrites - 01-20-2013, 03:03 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by doolasmind#11 - 01-20-2013, 03:19 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 08:09 AM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 11:06 AM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 12:06 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Card - 01-21-2013, 11:11 AM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by doolasmind#11 - 01-21-2013, 03:06 PM
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RE: Humanities Zoo - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 08:39 PM
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