Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision)

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Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision)

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01-20-2013, 01:59 PM

i did realise after i posted my feedback that you were working to a meter and that my is this needed was before i spotted the meter, i left it in anyway. (i should have removed it Smile

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Close by, longshoremen dazzled by the flash
and sudden thunder leap behind their freight comma after leap sorry i meant after thunder, i was rushing and it was wrong of me to do so.

Close by, longshoremen dazzled by the flash
and sudden thunder, leap behind their freight

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Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-17-2013, 06:54 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster - by Keith - 01-18-2013, 08:55 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster - by svanhoeven - 01-19-2013, 02:11 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 11:48 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 03:28 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-19-2013, 05:55 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 06:04 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by serge gurkski - 01-19-2013, 06:21 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-19-2013, 06:37 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 06:54 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by serge gurkski - 01-19-2013, 06:46 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-19-2013, 07:09 AM

RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 07:18 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-20-2013, 07:13 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by billy - 01-20-2013, 11:59 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-20-2013, 01:29 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by Todd - 01-20-2013, 12:19 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by Leanne - 01-20-2013, 01:55 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-20-2013, 02:52 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by billy - 01-20-2013, 01:59 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by Leanne - 01-20-2013, 03:10 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-21-2013, 12:25 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by billy - 01-20-2013, 03:10 PM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by Leanne - 01-21-2013, 05:33 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-23-2013, 07:02 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by Todd - 01-23-2013, 07:08 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by Leanne - 01-23-2013, 07:12 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by serge gurkski - 01-23-2013, 07:22 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-23-2013, 07:32 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by serge gurkski - 01-23-2013, 07:51 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by billy - 01-23-2013, 07:37 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by svanhoeven - 01-23-2013, 07:41 AM

RE: Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision) - by billy - 01-23-2013, 07:46 AM

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