01-20-2013, 01:41 PM
I literally wrote this one line by line in my head, without going back or thinking ahead. I hope it's good, but I don't really think it's fit for a critique thread.
Enjoy!(?)
If not for this damn weather,
I'd pull my act together,
and get all the shit that I forget!
But the snowflakes diminish,
The hopes I had to finish,
The fun I had done in the Sun!
The temperature gets colder,
As I get slowly older,
And the gas starts to pass from my ass!
I'm really not that lazy,
But these past few days were hazy,
And I hurt when the dirt gets on my shirt!
Enjoy!(?)
If not for this damn weather,
I'd pull my act together,
and get all the shit that I forget!
But the snowflakes diminish,
The hopes I had to finish,
The fun I had done in the Sun!
The temperature gets colder,
As I get slowly older,
And the gas starts to pass from my ass!
I'm really not that lazy,
But these past few days were hazy,
And I hurt when the dirt gets on my shirt!
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind