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[benthejack]

Doubt will kill development, I would encourage you never to remove something because you second guess yourself (although regrettably I do occasionally do that), Or you don't get the response you want, or for any other reason. Try sitting with the unpleasant feeling that arises and write a new poem about it
If you learn to happily accept the pain of doubt or rejection and steadfastly ignore the pleasure of compliments you'll definitely improve quickly at whatever it is your'e doing (I promise it works, money back guarantee).