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[cidermaid]

not answering for the gurksta - but when I read it I thought it was about the fact that oxytocin is released when we bond (so new babies, and also uterus blahblah) so you get it when you are close to a new person and that lovey mush feeling.

Yeh that could work I suppose, but i think that oxytocin is the female hormone and Vasopressin is the male version during sexual or any other form of phisical bonding and I had taken this to be a male voice in the poem.... so apprecaite the Blah, blah babies and uterus comment, probably was too much information, at the end of the day was just trying to quantify my nit for the sake of the critique. I think for me I just have too many post foaling pictures in my head to get beyond them and appreciate the use of this image. But as ever this is only my personal feel and opinion on this one word and this was a good read.