There is no bright light to travel toward (revision)

[Stalker]

hi again - having read the other comments, i would like to add that I think it is the long lines which really add to the restrained pace of this - no rushing. Although I was initially slightly bemused by the line breaks I think they also add to the feeling of jerky last moments and a slightly rambley disconnected air. One that you might expect under such circumstances.

So I overall the layout I think reinforces the topic.

about unzips - well I said already I like it - unzips doesn't mean taking-off though. It is more like leaving the edges apart - exposed maybe.

StalKeR