Takla makan

Takla makan

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01-20-2013, 01:18 AM

(01-20-2013, 12:10 AM)rowens Wrote: I think this sounds pretty good. To me it does. Only the line "to linger some senseless time more" seems sort of awkward at first.

Thank you. I could get rid of senseless time I guess.

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Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-19-2013, 08:05 AM

RE: Takla makan - by rowens - 01-20-2013, 12:10 AM

RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 01:18 AM

RE: Takla makan - by rowens - 01-20-2013, 01:22 AM

RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 01:24 AM

RE: Takla makan - by tectak - 01-20-2013, 01:28 AM

RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 01:33 AM

RE: Takla makan - by Stalker - 01-20-2013, 02:07 AM

RE: Takla makan - by cidermaid - 01-20-2013, 02:43 AM

RE: Takla makan - by Stalker - 01-20-2013, 02:46 AM

RE: Takla makan - by cidermaid - 01-20-2013, 03:06 AM

RE: Takla makan - by Stalker - 01-20-2013, 03:08 AM

RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 06:04 AM

RE: Takla makan - by shemthepenman - 01-21-2013, 12:28 AM

RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-21-2013, 05:18 PM

RE: Takla makan - by cidermaid - 01-21-2013, 05:36 PM

RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-21-2013, 05:43 PM

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