01-20-2013, 12:10 AM
I think this sounds pretty good. To me it does. Only the line "to linger some senseless time more" seems sort of awkward at first.
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Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-19-2013, 08:05 AM
RE: Takla makan - by rowens - 01-20-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: Takla makan - by rowens - 01-20-2013, 01:22 AM
RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 01:24 AM
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RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 01:33 AM
RE: Takla makan - by Stalker - 01-20-2013, 02:07 AM
RE: Takla makan - by cidermaid - 01-20-2013, 02:43 AM
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RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-20-2013, 06:04 AM
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RE: Takla makan - by serge gurkski - 01-21-2013, 05:18 PM
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