Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision)
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That's why you're the writer. Wink I'm not saying at all that that reconfiguration doesn't have challenges to overcome everything does. You have to weigh effectiveness, payoff, what you're trying to do. It's not necessarily the best choice, but it's worth giving some thought too. No matter what, I think you need to work on the current static opening. This might be a way to address it. It might not. You'll have to ultimately decide.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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RE: Texas City Disaster - by Keith - 01-18-2013, 08:55 AM
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RE: Texas City Disaster - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 11:48 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 03:28 AM
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