01-19-2013, 06:37 AM
Todd, I guess my misunderstanding came from your mention of ammunition and regime change.
Serge, thanks for the encouragement.
Now that two people have suggested starting with stanza 3, I want to attempt another revision, but as a beginner I seriously have no clue how to do that. I can't just delete S1 and S2, right? That means no context at the beginning, unless this changes from a historical narrative to a hypothetical event.
Do you two mean I should move S1 and S2 down to become a flashback or something?
Serge, thanks for the encouragement.
Now that two people have suggested starting with stanza 3, I want to attempt another revision, but as a beginner I seriously have no clue how to do that. I can't just delete S1 and S2, right? That means no context at the beginning, unless this changes from a historical narrative to a hypothetical event.
Do you two mean I should move S1 and S2 down to become a flashback or something?