Disaster on the SS Grandcamp (2nd Revision)
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great stuff!
Thick in the best sense of the word.
I agree with Todd starting this poem with stanza 3.

"Then null." Maybe the most effective 2 words I ever read in a poem. (seriously)

cheers and congrats!

Serge
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RE: Texas City Disaster - by Keith - 01-18-2013, 08:55 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster - by svanhoeven - 01-19-2013, 02:11 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 11:48 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 03:28 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by serge gurkski - 01-19-2013, 06:21 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 06:54 AM
RE: Texas City Disaster (1st Revision) - by Todd - 01-19-2013, 07:18 AM



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