There is no bright light to travel toward (revision)
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Wow. I'm not sure if its imagery or a different device but these the four lines:

this woman at my bedside, my wife,
presses a damp cloth to my face.

She has become
an actress in an old movie


really struck a note with me. Can you explain " These recollections form an endless list of mocking credits rolling"? I don't think i understand your use of mocking.
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RE: There is no bright light to travel toward (revision) - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 11:55 AM



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