A breeze from the Lake

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A breeze from the Lake

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01-18-2013, 05:58 AM

This is cool, very fluid and puts the reader right where you want them. I have nothing bad to say about this poem, just that I identify with it so dearly. I miss warmth.

-Sigh-

I'll be there in a minute.

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A breeze from the Lake - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 05:44 AM

RE: A breeze from the Lake - by newsclippings - 01-18-2013, 05:58 AM

RE: A breeze from the Lake - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 10:16 AM

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