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Haunted by Jellyfish

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01-18-2013, 01:23 AM

That was my earlier interpretation of saltwater but then it got all manga...ugly road that.

I agree with you on the solving the puzzle aspect it's one of the things I like about poetry. That's why most emo cutting poetry leaves me cold. I know the person is feeling pain, or despair in some abstract sense but there's nothing layered into the poem to give it any substance.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-15-2013, 10:44 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 11:06 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by monablackbird - 01-15-2013, 11:33 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by billy - 01-16-2013, 06:01 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 09:08 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by Todd - 01-16-2013, 09:11 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 09:30 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by Todd - 01-16-2013, 09:35 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by monablackbird - 01-16-2013, 09:38 PM

RE: Long Autumn’s Shore - by Todd - 01-16-2013, 10:14 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 08:36 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by billy - 01-17-2013, 08:40 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 08:43 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by Leanne - 01-17-2013, 08:51 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 09:32 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by Todd - 01-17-2013, 10:05 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-17-2013, 10:56 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by Todd - 01-17-2013, 11:25 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by brandontoh - 01-17-2013, 11:30 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-18-2013, 12:13 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by Todd - 01-18-2013, 12:45 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-18-2013, 01:14 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by Todd - 01-18-2013, 01:23 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-19-2013, 06:58 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by Leanne - 01-19-2013, 07:33 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by billy - 01-19-2013, 07:58 AM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by heslopian - 01-19-2013, 09:45 PM

RE: Haunted by Jellyfish - by monablackbird - 01-20-2013, 02:52 AM

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