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It's very simple and direct. One sentence/line then another. Not a lot of fancy tricks or poetic devices going on. But the content and the simplistic form seems charming to me. So I was curious if your other poems have any more "complicated" forms and devices. I like this, so I have no negative critique, or really constructive critique. It just appeals to me.
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Untitled - by YEG - 01-16-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 02:14 AM
RE: Untitled - by YEG - 01-17-2013, 02:37 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 02:44 AM
RE: Untitled - by YEG - 01-17-2013, 05:08 PM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 11:48 PM
RE: Untitled - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 10:07 AM



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