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Hi everyone, here's the first poem I've posted or even shared with anyone at all. I'm excited to hear what y'all have to say Smile

Just a couple notes before I post it:
- I'm not interested in rhyme at this moment in time, so far everything I've written has been freestyle
- I am also uninterested in titles at this moment. They seem too official and important-making for how I see my writing.
- I am writing with the potential thought of turning my poems into songs at some point.

Thus!
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We were in Cape Breton on a hill, near a house with two parts.
We were in Edmonton, journeying to the cathedral of my childhood dreams.
Neither a real place.
And the assignment was to walk.

Every time I see you after an absence this happens, and I hate it.
We were on the same page - both conflicted and unsure what to do.
But just to aire our thoughts and feelings was a release.
But then I wake up, and can't fall back asleep.
And it's made things worse now instead of better.
And I have to try and quash my longing, yet again.

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Thanks guys Smile
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Untitled - by YEG - 01-16-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 02:14 AM
RE: Untitled - by YEG - 01-17-2013, 02:37 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 02:44 AM
RE: Untitled - by YEG - 01-17-2013, 05:08 PM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 01-17-2013, 11:48 PM
RE: Untitled - by earlymorningnoises - 01-18-2013, 10:07 AM



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