01-16-2013, 09:08 PM
Thanks Billy! You're sort of on the right track as to the meaning but there's still something in there I thought the males would spot that hasn't been mentioned.
Made a bit of an edit for meter which works out to a rhythm of 5/6/7/5 for each stanza. Definitely seems to have more of a flow. I think. What do you guys think?
Thanks again!
Mona
Made a bit of an edit for meter which works out to a rhythm of 5/6/7/5 for each stanza. Definitely seems to have more of a flow. I think. What do you guys think?
Thanks again!
Mona

