To Liberty
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(01-15-2013, 09:20 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  Fascinating, i found this very easy to slip through-- the poem is a rhythm. I actually just read it the first time without understanding a single thing (the words were pretty).

I'm actually terrible at critical thinking... but I'm going to tell you that I like the allusion to the seven deadly sins -- is that somehow related to writing (as a profession)? Am I completely off? Wooftie.

Perhaps another few reads.
Not completely off at all Smile Don't worry if all you get is a general impression -- I don't believe poems should be riddles, so whatever you take from it is good enough. Thank you!

(01-16-2013, 01:16 AM)rowens Wrote:  I think all your poems should have an audio attached. I liked reading this out loud myself, I used my Braveheart voice.
You have a Braveheart voice? That must be... interesting Big Grin It only works if you paint your face with woad, you know.
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Messages In This Thread
To Liberty - by Leanne - 01-15-2013, 07:24 PM
RE: To Liberty - by newsclippings - 01-15-2013, 09:20 PM
RE: To Liberty - by rowens - 01-16-2013, 01:16 AM
RE: To Liberty - by Leanne - 01-16-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: To Liberty - by Keith - 01-16-2013, 09:13 AM
RE: To Liberty - by Leanne - 01-16-2013, 09:17 AM
RE: To Liberty - by Keith - 01-16-2013, 09:25 AM
RE: To Liberty - by Leanne - 01-16-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: To Liberty - by earlymorningnoises - 01-16-2013, 11:22 AM
RE: To Liberty - by Arriedo - 01-16-2013, 12:27 PM
RE: To Liberty - by Leanne - 01-16-2013, 03:01 PM
RE: To Liberty - by brandontoh - 01-16-2013, 06:33 PM



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