01-16-2013, 06:18 AM
Shattered glass.
Scattered image.
Broken mirror.
In your self-portrait,
fill missing pieces
that glue reused to hole.
That last line is sort of confusing
Find the scatter glass,
Is "scatter glass" what it's called? That rings a bell.
wishing these fragments of pain were plastic
so the bruises don't begin to bleed.---
I like this. Though I've cut myself with plastic before. And bleeding bruises is a pretty image.
But it stains.
No matter the heavy tears,
it still can't be washed out.
And this shattered image
masks the thornes
that hurt the closet living thing.
I think it's "thorns". I'm intrigued by the idea of the closet-living thing. And a little anxious about it.
Gradually becoming more defensive,
the thrornes thrive.
Typo: "thorns".
No one can get to the center.
Can't get it right.
Forever lost.
Oh "refused to hold".
And I got ahead of your last edit.
Scattered image.
Broken mirror.
In your self-portrait,
fill missing pieces
that glue reused to hole.
That last line is sort of confusing
Find the scatter glass,
Is "scatter glass" what it's called? That rings a bell.
wishing these fragments of pain were plastic
so the bruises don't begin to bleed.---
I like this. Though I've cut myself with plastic before. And bleeding bruises is a pretty image.
But it stains.
No matter the heavy tears,
it still can't be washed out.
And this shattered image
masks the thornes
that hurt the closet living thing.
I think it's "thorns". I'm intrigued by the idea of the closet-living thing. And a little anxious about it.
Gradually becoming more defensive,
the thrornes thrive.
Typo: "thorns".
No one can get to the center.
Can't get it right.
Forever lost.
Oh "refused to hold".
And I got ahead of your last edit.