Bleached (edit of Bleach)
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I see what you mean, I will definitely take that into consideration when rephrasing the first line.

I'll try and think of a way of seperating them without messing too much with the half-arsed meter.

It is the combination of drugs, depression and real life problems.

Hmm, just realized I used trapped in the second line. Will edit it.
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Bleached (edit of Bleach) - by Universalchild - 01-11-2013, 11:50 PM
RE: Bleached (edit of Bleach) - by Stalker - 01-13-2013, 12:44 AM
RE: Bleached (edit of Bleach) - by Universalchild - 01-15-2013, 04:30 AM
RE: Bleached (edit of Bleach) - by svanhoeven - 01-15-2013, 05:51 AM
RE: Bleached (edit of Bleach) - by Universalchild - 01-15-2013, 05:58 PM



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