Untitled 1st poem

Untitled 1st poem

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#17

01-15-2013, 01:00 PM

I might be an amateur, but i dont think that because you used a bunch of cliches makes your original poem less important. If nothing else its simply a stone to step from. a cliche ridden stone, maybe. i dont think you should change it.

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Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 09:07 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Arriedo - 01-14-2013, 09:39 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 09:55 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 10:37 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 10:51 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 11:00 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 11:05 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 11:16 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 11:39 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 11:55 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Leanne - 01-14-2013, 12:03 PM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-14-2013, 12:53 PM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by billy - 01-14-2013, 04:12 PM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Todd - 01-15-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-15-2013, 09:59 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by billy - 01-15-2013, 10:23 AM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by Mogra - 01-17-2013, 02:38 PM

RE: Untitled 1st poem - by earlymorningnoises - 01-15-2013, 01:00 PM

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